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Post by harmonia on Nov 11, 2007 0:39:52 GMT
This is just the start, i promise 2007, Redbridge college, Rouge Resturant. Aeyrn pushed Dameons through the glass double doors, smashing the doors to shards. Her booted feet made no sound until she reached the glass covered wooden floor of the resurant. "are you REALLY gonna fight me here?" he mocked her openly as she got closer. Aeyrn's eye's glowed as Dameons lifted up and flew over the head of the waiters setting up the thankfully empty resturant and into the kicthen next door. The way he went throught, wasent the door but the wall. Aeyrn on the other hand did walk through the waiters swing door and repiled her once happy voice now full of remorse and hate, "no, im gonna fight your in here, more pointy and sharp stuff to make them run after you" Dameons rolled off the scalding hot plate shelf and on the floor and stood up, "oh really? are you really going to this precious body?" he sneered at her as he stood up. Aeyrns eyes glowed as all the black handled knives, the sharp fish slices and the hot hob rings and pans raised into the air, and a flash of fear crossed Dameons face. This is NOT a one shot, its gonna be a story. Any charaters that are named and are based on people is delbritate
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Post by forza21 on Nov 12, 2007 17:26:11 GMT
Bit of a confusing star but it's interesting. Look after your grammar a few mistakes when it comes to starting speech.
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